My writing goal

My writing goal is to put full stops and capital letters in my writing. I have improved by using cope I used persistence I did not give up. I kept doing writing until I got it I put full stops in my last writing  I did about 95% I did pretty good. I got 95% because I was to hooked in to my writing not about my full stops and capital letters. My goal is to get every single capital letter and every full stop.

It was a hot day when blue dached out of bed he went to get blue the monster/robot. Red is always excited to see blue each morning. they both walked outSide and red thought why is there so much other robots around the place. Blue thought the same thing as red they steeped ford and a piece of metal came flying down and blue and red just dogged it time. They said to each other it not safe out there. They smelt the old smelly junk food in the rubbish bins. They