Man I was going quick bang my foot was crushed by my motocross bike. I smashed into this pole sticking up it was a massive thump. It was really slippery because it rained but I forgot it rained so I crashed quite bad.
This week we did some hook writing. Hook writing is when you hook the audience in on the first few sentences and keep them hooked through the hole entire story. The story up above that is mine and I did a hook story.
You had me hooked Barnie, well done, let's hope it doesn't really happen 😊
ReplyDeleteAwesome opening sentences to the story Barnie. Did you end up writing the rest of the story. I would be keen to read it...
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